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Orchids in a glass bowl

Filed under: Creative Works — Dakota Writing Project at 1:46 am on Tuesday, August 29, 2006



Orchids in a Glass Bowl (painting by Leah Drews)(the pretentious suitor)

by Michelle Rogge Gannon, University of South Dakota

    He asked, “Do you
    Think that I—that I
    Would have artificial flowers?”
    She was silent. Then:

      “My mistake. They seemed—
      Too lovely to be real.”
      She added, “But everything
      Else I’ve said holds true.”
      She collected her beaded purse,
      Along with the white lace shawl
      From the hall closet (both
      Gifts from him). Then:

        One last look at the fifth
        Course of a six-course
        Meal on fine porcelain
        Plates with chargers, at the elegant
        Man who might have offered the final
        Course. Even as she
        Thought of it, her stomach
        Expanded, as if to insist that she
        Still had room. Then:
      “Wait, he said. He plucked
      Just the right orchid, positioning the bloom,
      Pale cream against her coffee curls.
      “Perfectly delectable,” he said.

    At home, later, in the boarding
    House where she lived, the pestering
    Child in the room next door was inventing
    Waltzes, wearing a whitish shawl-dress,
    Beaded bag swinging (some beads gone now),
    Wilted orchid flopping in her tangled
    Little-girl locks.

Note: The inspiration for this poem was a painting by Leah Drews, Orchids in Glass Bowl. The artist is the poet’s sister.

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